Wednesday, January 21, 2009

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In the reading of the Liars Club, one gets bombarded with the use of imagery. Karr uses many different ways to assist in her descriptions. One of the more reoccurring describers though is the use of smell. Karr relates smells to a specific adjective or feeling. She helps transcend what she wants the reader to feel often through the smell that she relates to something good, or bad, or nice, etc.

The first example of this is when Mary is talking about draining her parent’s alcohol. Karr writes, “Dumping those bottles down the sink drain, I always craned my face away” (236). Literally, when smelling alcohol many people have to lean back because of its strength. This also helps to show how Mary feels about her parents drinking. Other then the obvious fact that she is dumping the alcohol down the drain, she also cannot stand what it does to them. She mentions that she is surrounded by poisons, yet that smell she cannot stand. Partially that smell is associated with her negative feelings about her parents drinking.

Karr states that the “brown liquor” seemed dangerous to even breathe showing her unfavorable feelings toward it through the sense of smell. There is a theme of alcohol being related to negative events or feelings. There was alcohol involved during the night of the mother’s breakdown, when Hector’s sister Purty is attacked, and also when mother threatens to shoot Hector. Mary not liking the smell of alcohol is related to those bad experiences, along with always having to take care of her mother. Ultimately it is the reason why Lecia and Mary decided to stay with the mother rather then go back to Texas with Daddy. There is resent in Mary’s mind about alcohol, and it is described by her hating the smell of it, even though she lives near many other poisons or bad smells in the atmosphere.

Another example of how Karr uses smell to help with her descriptions is when Mary and Lecia finally get back to Leechfield and see their Daddy again. Karr uses the smell of coffee to say that it brought her whole former Daddy back. She states right after, “I knew the solvent he used to strip grease from his hands, and the Lava soap applied with a fingernail brush.”(262). In this description, Mary associates the smell to all the things she once knew about her father. This happens a lot to people when they are apart from something they love, whether it is the smell of an activity, a loved person, or even a certain food. She uses the smell of coffee to bring her dad right back to everything that she was angry at herself for forgetting. This is enhancing the good feelings that Karr is trying to describe in this paragraph.

Karr uses smell to conjure her dad up early also, when in her mother’s bar. Through the alcohol fumes and smoke Mary gets the image of her father after she is handed a black eye from Big Bertha’s boyfriend. She takes comfort in what she believes her imaginary father would have told her after she got punched. She wasn’t naïve enough to think that it was really Daddy, but the smell brought her back to him, perhaps the liars club, and she felt relieved that he was there with her even though she was alone. In this instance she uses smell to remember something good, or enhance describing her feeling of being at ease.

Karr uses smell to help her bring to life the feeling that she is describing. She can do it through both negative and positive ways, as shown through the examples. Karr allows the smell of certain objects to lead into many different feelings, or even more imagery.

5 comments:

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  2. 1)I see that your thesis is about how Kerr's strongest sense of imagery is smell and you used two images so that's fine too.
    1b)At the beginning make sure you put The Liars' Club in italics (even though I accidentally did quotes around mine :])and don't forget the apostrophe. Make it known that Mary Kerr is the author a bit more clearly rather than just leading into using her name.
    2)I think you did a pretty good job choosing direct quotes and relating them to your thesis. To me it doesn't seem like any quotes so unsupported so I believe that's okay too.
    3)You didn't over or under summarize.
    4)Maybe point out some instance of other imagery like sight and sound and make them look weak in comparison to back up your thesis? For added effect! :)
    5)Second paragraph: "parents' alcohol" move the apostrophe, "partially that" is there a missing because there. Fifth paragraph:apostrophe in the liars' club, and it wasn't Big Bertha's boyfriend it was her and the mark was from her boyfriend's class ring. :)
    6) I think you used opinion as proof.
    7) You didn't get off topic.

    I guess my only comment would be that I read through it once and was kind of confused but read it a second time and it made total sense. I guess just read over it and make sure it's clear.

    I just realized that I spelled Karr's name as Kerr so I'm going to go fix that in my blog because I'm an idiot. Good job! :)

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  3. 1) Very clear thesis stating that smell is a big image in the Liars Club, but what about another image?
    1b)The name of the book and author are both mentioned in the first paragraph.

    2) I really liked the quotes you used to display how the smells made Mary feel. They gave a great picture of her facial expression and the page number of where you got the quotes was right after each quote.

    3) You did a good job at relating how the smells in paragraph 4 effect other people too. You could use more a summary in the second to last paragraph to explain how the smells conjure her dad up early.

    4)Maybe its not the smell of the liquor but more of the image of seeing what it does to her mother and knowing what it has done to the family?

    6)Though I feel that you have a good argument about smells being a big image in Mary's life, I think you should support it more with a little bit more detail and reasons of why you believe that way.

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  4. 1. The statement is clear and direct, but I am not sure how argumentative it is. Smell is clearly used in the book to involve other senses that further entice the reader, and it is important to the writing. I also like that you used the notion of smell in the book and related it back to Mary's resentment towards her parents' heavy drinking. But I think it would have been good to dive deeper into how Mary feels about the drinking and why she may use smell to driver her point home. It was good to include the name of the book immediately and to include the authors name, but I think that you should have used the first and last name first.
    2. There are several quotes to support the thesis and I think that they are good examples. There is a clear use of smell in the examples which is the point that you were trying to make. There were some other parts of the book that had some even stronger points about smell. When Mary's grandmother is living with her, I think that the imagery of smell that is used is the best. I can smell the death and decay of the old woman as she describes it. I liked that after the quotes, you further explained what you thought that they meant to Mary. The analysis of the quotes was good.
    3. I didn't find any parts of the blog post that was summarizing at all. The only time that you explained the book what to introduce a quote to support what you were saying, which I thought was great!
    4. I don't think that there are too many arguments that can be made against the thesis because it is so apparent. Maybe this is why I think it is too obvious... maybe I agree too much.
    5. In the third paragraph you said that there is 'resent in Mary's mind about alcohol'. Did you maybe mean resentment? Also, you said that Big Bertha's boyfriend hit Mary. But Big Bertha is the one who hit her, it was Big Bertha's boyfriend's ring that gave Mary a black eye.
    6. The way that you used your thoughts about what you thought the smell meant to Mary and to you, as a way to tie in the examples to what your overall point is.
    7. I think that you stayed with the smells the whole time and remained consistent.

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  5. Good idea here. Need to clarify how Karr uses smells and be a bit more specific about the effect you believe this has on a reader.

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